I took my shoes off for you...?

running on rooftops





with crooked shoes





casting my cares





into guilty clouds





riding on rainbows





that havent any end





exploring my way





down a one way path





driving home





without any gas





calling for you





through an empty night





staring into water





in a cold moonlight





piecing together shards of glass





yellow blue and green





this has become my looking glass





I see beyond





earth and its dispare





to a place





where there is no race





to be seen





the poeple there





come in yellow blue and green





the world is our rooftop





we wear judgement on our feet

I took my shoes off for you...?
wow... that's really good..
Reply:nice poem...now put your shoes back on please......jk seriously its pretty good
Reply:cool
Reply:can you say... "Amazing!"
Reply:why would you take your shoes off for us? we dont even know you.
Reply:I thought it was pretty good
Reply:nice...
Reply:omg that is awesome! you r a real poet!
Reply:Hon, why are the clouds "guilty"?
Reply:pretty good but your rhyming scheme is off, it rhymes in some places but not in others. good words though :)



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