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Saturday, October 24, 2009

Read my poem "if i could change the world" 4 lines is a new stanza?

if i could change the world someday


i wuldnt do it any ordianary way,


i would start with the war that we must fight,


there are no rules, so hold on tight.


Next i would start with our infamous "pres"-


eventually having all eat food such as pez.


he will end this wihout a doubt,


making us all scream and shout.


After dealing with our nation's leader,


i would deal with a number 1 killer.


AIDS have been killing for over 30 years,


giving people hope will jst bring tears.


i want to change this planet,


to make it a better world.


but to start fixing this not so perfect place,


i have to win a future presidential race.


polar icecaps are melting in the north and south,


killing animals almost every day,


such an easy problem to fix,


all we have 2 do is recyle some garbage away.


povrty is next on my list of things to do,


poverty is someone who can only afford one shoe.


living on the side of the street in a small box,


looking for food:a ouse, squirrel,or even a fox.

Read my poem "if i could change the world" 4 lines is a new stanza?
Journeyf, Interesting thoughts! However, poor English. void of rhyme. Do continue though; perhaps someday you might get it all together; never give up! :-)



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